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Nobody knows what happen tomorrow, but everything is necessary for myself on my life. This is my road I have been walking to be HAPPY-aging not anti-aging. And, where there's a will, there's a way!

今までの道 これからの道 私のHAPPYエイジングロード♪

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Some Suggestions from My Teacher  添削アドバイス

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My English teacher gave advice about my blog.
I was very glad and it was useful for me.
So I'd like to share with you.
Please look at the below.

私の英会話の先生が、ブログの添削メールを送ってくださいました。
「Handmade Umeboshi Rice ball 自家製梅干しおにぎり」の投稿分についてです。
そのまま転記しますので、よろしかったらご参考にしてください。


*Your underlined words / sentences should be changed.
*The sentence under it is written with my recommendations in bold black & underlined.
__________________
Do you like Umeboshi?
Have you ever made Umeboshi?
Actually I made Umeboshi this year for the first time.
I had the chance to preserve fresh Ume in salt with my English teacher
at her house this summer.
It was really fun!
And we brought it to each home, continued to make Umeboshi.
It took about three months and completed

We each brought them home and let them sit for 3 months and then they were ready to eat.

The other day, I made small rice balls with my umeboshi.

First, I boiled the rice with one umeboshi in a rice cooker.
Next, add small dried fishes and sesames in the umeboshi rice, and mix.
Next, added small dried fish and sesame seeds in the umeboshi rice, and mixed.
Then, make rice ball
Then, made rice balls.
Finally, wrap them with shiso(green perilla)
Finally, wrapped them with shiso(green perilla).

It was good!
If you like shiso, try to use shiso instead of nori for rice balls.



梅干しおにりぎの作り方の部分は、レシピのつもりで書いたので現在形にしたのですが、
この場合は、やはり過去形にしないとオカシイですね。
うっかりミスも多くて恥ずかしいのですが、細かいところまで、アドバイスしていただき感激でした(^^)/


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ダイエット妄想ママ says... ""
Hi Mittanr

You are so lucky because your teacher corrected your
English.
How nice!!
I have tried to write English sentences but I don't know
whether my English has improved or not.
I have tried to write grammatical correct
English sentences,
but I don't know whether they are correct or not.
2013.11.26 19:47 | URL | #014MdbJw [edit]
mittanr says... "Re:"
Hi, ダイエット妄想ママsan,

Yeah,that's right.
I'm a so lucky English learner!
When I started to learn English, one of my English teacher recommended keeping a diary and gave corrections to me for about one year.
After I left the first English conversation school, I started this blog.
But, I couldn't know if my English is good or bad, so I was worrying about this blog, however my present English teacher encourages me to keep up this blog always.
And sometimes she gives advice to me.
I'm very happy!
And I do appreciate your comment always.
Thank you so much!
2013.11.27 17:07 | URL | #- [edit]

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