Hi, Thanks for coming to my blog. I took an English conversation lesson today, and I got some corrections for my blog from my teacher, so I want to inform about my mistakes. I'm happy if that be useful for you.
We made some dishes with yellowtail and ate them. Because we got a naturalwild fresh yellowtail last week. I was very surprised when the package of yellowtail arrived at my house. Actually I didn't know my husband bought it on the Internet. So, I shouted,”Why did PaPa(my husband) buy it?! Who will cut that big fish?!” And I emailed " Come home shortly!!" to him. Well,we cut it at late night late at night after he came home. It was not easy for us of course. Can you imageimagine our kitchen? But the sashimi was so delicious at that nightlate that night. And the pot food for yellowtail called "Buli Shabu" was really good! Yeah, we enjoyed cooking some kinds of dishes with yellowtail and eating them for about four days. And I felt more thankful for getting the living things because we cut the big fish by ourselves.
下線を引いた部分。。。 pot food...この場合はShabu Shabu（しゃぶしゃぶ）と書いた方が通じるそうです。
And I felt...のセンテンスは、下記が先生のアドバイス。 → And I felt very thankful for the life of this fish because we finally enjoyed it so much.
By the way, I have been growing soybeans in the PET bottles. I have them listen to music sometimes. I guess they like dancing with music. That looks fun!